The Slyest Fox Intro Mark... whatever

Im not sure where to go from here. Please let me know if you have any criticisms, leave a comment or email me at superjitan at gmail dot com. all constructive criticism will be greatly appreciated.

The Slyest Fox Intro (Pre-Rendered)

This is an early peek at my upcoming intro for Calli (aka the slyestfox on YT)
I still need to do something with the text and then render it (plus anything else Calli wants me to do to it), this was captured using iShowU, the quality should be better when it's actually rendered.

For more of my intros, go to http://www.youtube.com/cauxilus
And also if you're not already subscribed, http://www.youtube.com/theslyestfox, you should be :)